Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In every developed country, medical facilities, including advanced and expensive treatments, are provided to its citizens free of cost and it is possible only because such countries have highly developed and well established systems and services. I believe that government of every country should be responsible enough to provide its people with free health services but it cannot be possible for under developed countries.
Those countries which are striving hard to access basic needs; it would not be their priority to provide people with medical facilities but to offer them basic necessities like food, shelter and clothing. In order to be capable of having such facilities, it is crucial to understand the complete cycle of systems. In developed countries, their administration is really well organised and equipped with the latest technology. Their citizens pay their taxes with honesty and responsibility which enable governments to establish free services like health. This can be possible in developed countries only because their people have employment and regular income sources. Whereas, citizens of third world country do not have either of these, then how can they submit taxes and as a result would not get free health services. Therefore, by keeping in view these facts, this cannot be applied on all governments.
However, developed states should necessarily help people in establishing cost free hospital services. They should cover cost of any disease no matter whether minor or major; basic or chronicle. It is their first and foremost obligation to introduce policies and laws which give support to pharmaceutical industry so that they conduct more research in identifying better ways of cure.
To conclude, provision of free medical assistance by the governments should be their top preference, but many third world countries spend their funds in other critical areas, such as in offering a safe place of living and food to its citizens. Therefore, this facility, undoubtedly, should be cost free but not every nation can have it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, third, well, whereas, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3746130031 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81496855465 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.400301995 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231202003007 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868074057133 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495307072782 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147994750116 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044797570563 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.