Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this world, We are most talented human because we holds colossal amount of information and it is platitude that it will increase in future. But some people thinks that this shall not be exposed in public whereas other's thinking is not to make it publicly available because of its importance. I think is every information should be available openly.
On the one hand, I believe in wisdom which can be gets only by sharing knowledge freely without any barrier. If people like decided to share their knowledge openly and freely then even poor people can also be able to get that one. Nowadays people need to pay for those knowledge. But sharing information can improve our day to day mundane tasks. Like if foreign scientist share their knowledge to any other poor country then it will so useful to that country to implement it because sometime people doesn't own money to do practicals and experiments so, these kind of help will definitely improves human lives.
Whereas, some people think that information is so valuable to share or make it public will be warm to the society only. Because these kind of information are sensitives which can destroy our human being too. It is vulnerable for people and also useful for dreadful people to use it in negative way. Like making nuclear bomb on social media or creating explosion with help of non metal material which cannot be detect in metal detector, government's confidential information
In a nutshell, Knowledge or information is free. It is up to us that how to handle it. Sharing knowledge can only helps to give more wisdom only. It does matter if information is valuable or not, what matters is how we human handle those information. We should use that in positive way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
..., We are most talented human because we holds colossal amount of information and it i...
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Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d it is platitude that it will increase in future. But some people thinks that this shall...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...at one. Nowadays people need to pay for those knowledge. But sharing information can improve ou...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...to implement it because sometime people doesnt own money to do practicals and experime...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ey to do practicals and experiments so, these kind of help will definitely improves human ...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
... so, these kind of help will definitely improves human lives. Whereas, some people ...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ublic will be warm to the society only. Because these kind of information are sensitive...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ll be warm to the society only. Because these kind of information are sensitives which can...
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Line 9, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or, governments confidential information In a nutshell, Knowledge or information ...
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Line 13, column 233, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...ot, what matters is how we human handle those information. We should use that in positive way. ...
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Line 13, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. We should use that in positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84899328859 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58245405784 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2434532185 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25609654343 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833140001917 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056862011748 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150811164952 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476595108912 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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