Smacking children is the best form of discipline.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this new generation young people gets smacked by their parents in giving them punishment if they did wrong. Physical punishment is dangerous because the children might get hurt seriously and adults or guardian may get into prison. This essay will argue that spanking young individual is totally unacceptable to discipline them though there are better way on how to discipline the children today.
Parents are well known by disciplining their children by giving them punishment when the did something bad to others. Some parents punish them physically because the believed that by doing this kind of act to children they will not do mistakes all over again. In addition, adults are completely aware that this is the traditional way of punishing to correct their behavior as they grow up. Indeed, there are children now grown up with a good behavior in school and other places because they are well-trained and educated by their parents. Therefore smacking children for doing wrong is the correct method to discipline them.
However, despite of all the traditional method of disciplining a child by giving them physical punishment is completely dangerous. Physical punishment can lead to serious mental and physical illness and it could affect the behavior of a child when they are growing up. As for parents there are a lot of punishment they would apply such as teaching them the right and wrong act or give them reward if they do good. So that a child can not do wrong anymore.
It is clear that physical punishment is not the best way to discipline the children they will only hurt their child for doing this thing to them and if it is could go serious they will get imprisonment because it can lead to child abuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as for, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59434413683 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455782312925 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8506419414 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958355989977 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482695454018 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439312377038 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070623659322 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302693134642 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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