Essay topics:
it is more important to keep old friends than make new friends
Keeping on touch with old friends should be considered more important than making new friends, in my opinion. When making relationship with people, we usually spend a lot of time building intimate connection with people and it is hard to sustain it. However, making new friends would be relatively easy because we can make friends at school, at work, or almost any circumstances. But will these relationships survive after years? I doubt that.
Old friends are someone would not be able to be replaced. Whenever I see an old friend, I feel comfortable talking and hanging out with him or her. I would not need to
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out with him or her. I would not need to
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 521.0 1977.66487455 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 407.700716846 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91509433962 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 4.48103885553 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7481829979 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 212.727598566 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754716981132 0.524837075471 144% => OK
syllable_count: 151.2 618.680645161 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1967919216 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.125 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428873802275 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148001851673 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180403431346 0.0737576698707 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304858342859 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104907932729 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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