Overpopulation of urban areas has to led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can be tackle these problems.
A huge number of people are migrating to urban areas for several reasons. This led to overcrowding of urban areas and cause innumerable problems.
Admittedly, day by day population of urban areas is increasing drastically. This cause detrimental effects socially as well as environmentally. Firstly, increase number of people means increases number of houses and to build those houses many trees are being cut and land are used. Deforestation is the primary cause of natural disaster like soil erosion and landslides.Adittionally, atmosphere is getting more polluted each day due to industrialisation and clearing trees even worsen the situations. Secondly, there are more cases of crime in the city because of overpopulation. Everyone is not getting job as per the expenditure needed to stay in the city as living in the city is costly. That’s why people do get engaged in illegal work where they can earn more money as compared to normal job.
However, these problems can be tackled by efforts from both government and individual. From government side more facilities namely hospital, industry and school should be provided to people in rural areas so that they needn’t to go to city for better facilities. If the problem persists for large extent then government should introduce one child policies like China government did to reduce number of population in China. Individual also have self responsibility to protect their deteriorating environment and should be concerned while using the resources be it land, electricity and water. If they use these resources excessively, their future generation will face a scarcity of everything and will be in mesirable condition.
In conclusion, although overpopulation is the unmanageable problem, people have to come up with alternative solutions to solve problems concerning with overpopulation as no child policies is not applicable. The continuous effort form government as well as individual is necessary to solve the problem caused by overpopulation.
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems. 84
- some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree.what is your opinion?give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 61
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. 78
- The process below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 78
- some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree.what is your opinion?give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ndia is fluctuating between 4 and 5. In contrast birthrate of Europe countries significa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...significantly less than in Asia region. it connects with child tax, which reduces ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
..., which reduces chances to have a baby. this method has minor risks like depopulatio...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...is age restriction for having children. this solution has ambiguity opinion among po...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...is an individual choice of each person. this viewpoint is stopping progress of this ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...nd effects of this controversial issue. Moreover they must to demolish that until it put...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...this controversial issue. Moreover they must to demolish that until it put down roots, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17446808511 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88918935343 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714893617021 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7910603363 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0740682775803 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215746562397 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341292848238 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431475709557 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330917650675 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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