Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
In modern world one of the most doubtable problems is overpopulation. A huge number of people are migrating to urban areas for several reasons. This led to overcrowding of metropolises and cause of innumerable problems. While some people are figuring out how to deal with that, government and individuals can make it less dangerous, by developing rural areas and protecting atmosphere.
Admittedly, day by day process of urbanization is increasing drastically. This thing has colossal effects on social status as well as on environment. Increasing amount of population means increasing amount of houses and to build that many trees are being chopped and land are used. Deforestation it is simple example of natural disasters like soil erosion and landslides. While industrialization is developing, atmosphere is being more polluted and majority of green spaces is being wasted. Besides, rising of criminal activity binds with overpopulation. Not everyone has a job, however all of them want to survive. That is why people are getting illegal work, where they can earn more money.
In spite of this, these problems can be solved by government and individuals. From government side upgrading of conditions for rural areas would destroy needs to move to city for better facilities. If problem binds with birthrate then government should to introduce one child policies like it was in China, which reduced the number of population. individuals also have self-responsibility to save and protect environment. For instance they may use natural resources more accurate that would be good boost for next generation.
To sum up, although society needs colossal measure of time to solve overpopulation issue, government and individuals have opportunities and tools to solve that.
- some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree.what is your opinion?give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 61
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. 78
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- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems. 84
- some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree.what is your opinion?give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individuals
...which reduced the number of population. individuals also have self-responsibility to save a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, as for, for instance, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43115942029 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22027061396 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4778349374 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2777777778 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179453214755 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467243763832 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452395178519 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107315218457 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070540259114 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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