About people make friends through social sites and chat rooms
Nowadays, it is true that many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. I totally disagree this issue can give more advantage than disadvantage. It is because, make friends through social sites or chat rooms or whatever the name is that make without meeting them face to face is not good for our social life, where when we make friendship by this way make we ignore our environment. For example we can find many young people bound to their friends in social sites, as result they in generally forget their position in their social environment.
Eventough like that does not mean make friends by this way have not advantage absolutely. On the other hand make friends through social sites and chat rooms can give advantage like knowledge about lifestyle in different places. It is because make friends by this way make possible we to make friends with other people by different country in this world.
So because this problem have advantage and disadvantage, i think this issue is not a good idea but not a bad idea to, suspended how we receive this issue. We must make friends through social sites and chat rooms without hurt or ignore our social life in reality life, i mind be smart people in use social sites and something like that and smart in any places and world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'advantaged'.
Suggestion: advantaged
... mean make friends by this way have not advantage absolutely. On the other hand make frie...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...roblem have advantage and disadvantage, i think this issue is not a good idea but...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ignore our social life in reality life, i mind be smart people in use social site...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i think, in general, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72123893805 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33391875527 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469026548673 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4623439649 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.536805481888 0.244688304435 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259536091632 0.084324248473 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195819432687 0.0667982634062 293% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.406199812472 0.151304729494 268% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675502407066 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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