Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The main role of the performers is to entrain peoples living around the world. A few people will have the opinion that person one who is in the entertaining field getting more salary. In my view, not all the singers and artist are highly paid but a few of them are overpaid. Social workers, farmers should be
paid more as they are working to improve society.
There is only a few reasons to get paid much one of such reason is their popularity among the people. The most famous actor will paid much comparing to others still the less famous artist will not be paid much. People will use the entertainment system only to reduce their stress and keep them happy. So, paying the huge amount the artists is not an efficient measure and also this field will not increase the countries development. Nowadays these film stars are getting huge salary for a single film. For example, Jackie chan is getting 58 million dollars for a single film whereas some other employees may not get that salary throughout their lifetime even worked harder too.
Agriculture, science and technology are key factors of the countries development. If peoples working in these sectors paid more means employees will get satisfied as a result it will increase productivity. So, it will lead to the economic development of the country. Both the skilled and unskilled workers in the agriculture domain should be paid more by doing so we can reduce the rate of poverty of the country. Furthermore, exporting agriculture products across the world will also increase country growth. As a result, of this, we will get the dual benefit. The rate of poverty and economic growth are inversely related to each other.
In conclusion, everyone should be paid based on the work they are doing. The person who is doing tough jobs should be paid more than the one doing litter job. None should be paid based on popularity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8282208589 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4733971684 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530674846626 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4879341971 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229828434755 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724977479459 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580909844129 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132262870687 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631370466659 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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