In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With the development of technology, a growing number of people incline to shop online and even give up going shopping in the department store. Although online shopping has a few deficiencies, i believe it tends to be positive to us.
Firstly, there is no doubt that shopping online bring much convenience to us. it increases the flexibility in time and the efficiency in purchasing, because shops online are available 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Furthermore, for those who always lead a hectic life, it is also a time-saving way to consume because they can make a comparison at any time, in contrast to spending long time on shopping in department store and choosing for a cheaper prices among the goods. Therefore, online shopping is more suitable for people for its convenience.
On the top of that, it provides more services than the real stores. You can receive the products in short days, usually 2 or 4 days, due to the express services. And at the same time, a free opportunity prepared to change or even return your goods to the manufacturers if you are not satisfied with it, because of the after-sale services. the whole procedures are not difficult to deal with. Thus, more benefits are offered，compared with shopping in real stores.
To summary, online shopping brings both convenience and better services to us when i reckon that shopping in the store is time-consuming and few quality guarantees. What we really need is to have a satisfactory shopping experience, so the trend in the case is positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, thus, i reckon, in contrast, in short, no doubt, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90769230769 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01612039689 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5948999406 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272383281469 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102320499606 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660731316581 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176008548604 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636190084377 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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