You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the books which I was not able to revert on a due date because one of my family member had a cardiac arrest and I had to go there for his care.
Yesterday my cousin sister had called my father that her grandfather had a severe heart attack and they had immediately rush to the medical centre. For her help my parents told me to join her in the city hospital that is approximately 70 kilometres from my house and support them until uncle will recover.
Please pardon me for not giving back the books. I had planned to return some books such as physiology and anatomy yesterday but suddenly this emergency came out.
If you give me a time of one week, I will definitely submit all the books in a given period and also I will assure you this will never happen again.
Hope to get a positive reply from you.
Yours Faithfully,
John Carter
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... support them until uncle will recover. Please pardon me for not giving back the...
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...such as physiology and anatomy yesterday but suddenly this emergency came out. ...
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... reply from you. Yours Faithfully, John Carter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50588235294 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3118769618 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6237322385 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168457010377 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072120194501 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591604665285 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103027794868 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516116277053 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.