Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
The current generation is more practical and economical when it comes to planning a family, which is why it is vague that youngsters might settle with a soul mate. This practice does have some benefits along with few flaws of its own.
Good quality education, ambitious careers and prosperous lifestyle have cherished people to work excessively harder. Both men & women are being extremely competitive in professional fields and are outranking each other all the time. Thus, couples have less time to allocate to their families at a young age and hence, resulting in the delay of marriage. In India, many successful youngsters of the higher &upper middle class have delayed their marriage to the thirties and post-marriage has only one child which helped them to sustain in the daily hustle and not be financially burdened. This idea has helped people in maintaining a decent economic lifestyle and has improved society.
However, the same ideology has impacted developed countries and their potential to grow in future. A developed country like Japan popularized the idea of late marriage and have one child or no child. Japanese tend to be very professional and intelligent when it comes to overpowering world technology with theirs. Over the decades, they have contributed enormously towards the improvement of technology and connectivity. But in the last few decades, Japan has also recorded a significant drop in the headcount of youngsters which happened due to lesser marriages in society and fewer children. It is said that close to 80% of Japan’s population falls under old age criteria. The country also lacks human resource to carry forward its decades-long legacy of works in various industries.
To put up my opinion, I think youngsters should make some time to live their present while working rigorously towards building a future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d countries and their potential to grow in future. A developed country like Japan popular...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23825503356 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87780544618 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634228187919 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2227824952 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131680292894 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405856331671 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284318804084 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692865106331 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284556086464 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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