People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
The life is becoming hard and hard in big cities. People in big cities suffer from different obstacles to deal with their daily matters. They are dealing with traffic, pollution and workload problems. These things can be minimized with the government intervention. The government can give the various incentives to live in regional areas.
People move in the big cities to avail of facilities and to live a comfortable life, but in the big cities’ facilities are limited for limited people. Therefore, crowded areas create mess and discomfort for their natives. In populated areas, people have to deal with various types of diseases which can be occurred with air, water and noise pollutions. Cars and buses spread the noise pollution as well as air pollution. Moreover, huge traffic becomes the hurdle to reach to the destination, so often worker cannot reach their workplaces on time which create work stress. Live in big cities is not a good choice.
The government can resolve this problem by giving the basic necessities to the people who are living in the regional area so that they will not move in the big cities. Moreover, big cities people will also move to the regional area to enjoy the peaceful life of villages. It will give them a good standard of life. On the other side, they will have healthy and pure lives.
To sum up the arguments, life in big cities is not a reasonable choice because it will increase the discomfort and mess, so the government should take initiative to move people from big cities to small regional areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... can resolve this problem by giving the basic necessities to the people who are living in the reg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85283018868 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53232571943 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505660377358 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6470245301 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268501546135 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872088152358 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797638396043 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180163739747 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509209474474 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.