Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
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Modern life always makes some unpredictable situations in life. Base on what people might face in the future, everyone must have planned for specific activities which will do in the future especially young people because they are at the forefront. In my pint of view, it is necessary for young people to have a plane for their future to make their future successful and happy.
To begin with, phycologists claims that having a plane for the future makes people more hopeful and more active to believe what they want to do. As a result, young people who have a plane can have many opportunities to choose for their future job and life. For instance, a student who has a plane can start selecting his job life eld before graduation or even can find a specific company he might like to work within a close future.
Secondly, thinking about what will you do in the future always help you to find people who are in your phase of energy, indeed these people can help you to reach what you want in your carrier. For example, a person with a plane to work in pharmacy after graduation, he will find people who are related to this field to help him and encourage him to find out the way to get success in this market.
Thirdly, despite all these things have been said about the plane in the future, still many other benefits which could mention. When you know what to do in your life with the plane you put for yourself, life will me more relaxable and comfortable with no stress because you know what will do. To make this point clear, when you as a student know that when you graduate where to work and whom to meet definitely you can study with a free mind and happily enjoy your study.
To sum up, having a plane and know what to do in the early future even in work life or social life can change your gains in a better way and somehow you can predict what you will do step by step to reach your goals.
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- tpo42 integrated writing
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...t what will you do in the future always help you to find people who are in your phase of energy,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, you know, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02412489758 2.67179642975 151% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457300275482 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8759993703 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214724246817 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103802446918 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776722650365 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130459842124 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971142787169 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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