In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government s to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree
A growing number of people suffer from health related conditions due to excessive consumption of processed foods. I totally agree that it is important for government to hike the taxes on convenience foods because this will discourage people from buying junk foods and also it will promote healthy eating and snacking on vegetables,fruits and nuts.
Hiking the taxes paid on fast foods would deter the consumers from purchasing them because it is expensive to buy. When people cannot easily afford these costly processed foods, they tend to cook and eat healthy meals at home,also decreasing the rate of junk food consumption.Therefore, people will eat a balanced diet and become healthier. A good example is my obese aunty who loves to eat chicken and chips at a food court. After the price increased, she could not afford it and started preparing healthy meals at home, she shed some weight and ate healthy.
In addition, levying a higher tax on takeaway foods tends to promote a vegetarian lifestyle and snacking on fruits and nuts. When people cannot afford the costly ice cream and burger, they snack more on fruits and nuts and eat adequate vegetables. Thus,living a disease -free live. As a result, more people become vegetarians and do not suffer from any health -related conditions. A case in point is the study by some Cardiologists, which reveals that people who consumed more processed foods, were more prone to suffer from heart related conditions compared to individuals who ate more of vegetables,fruits and nuts who were less likely to have any heart disorders.
In conclusion, with the rising number of individuals suffering from various health disorders caused by a replete consumption of processed food, I agree that government should enforce a higher tax on takeaway foods in order to deter people from buying them and promote healthy nutrition and lifestyle.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ruits and nuts. Hiking the taxes paid on fast foods would deter the consumers ...
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...nd to cook and eat healthy meals at home,also decreasing the rate of junk food consum...
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...asing the rate of junk food consumption.Therefore, people will eat a balanced diet and be...
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...er. A good example is my obese aunty who loves to eat chicken and chips at a food...
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...vegetables,fruits and nuts who were less likely to have any heart disorders. ...
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...der to deter people from buying them and promote healthy nutrition and lifestyle....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91294387702 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7463449465 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288779079646 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110884670384 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760219456039 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201340991445 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603457564768 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
A growing number of people suffer from health related conditions du...
^^
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fruits
...ealthy eating and snacking on vegetables,fruits and nuts. Hiking the taxes paid on ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ruits and nuts. Hiking the taxes paid on fast foods would deter the consumers ...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , also
...nd to cook and eat healthy meals at home,also decreasing the rate of junk food consum...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...asing the rate of junk food consumption.Therefore, people will eat a balanced diet and be...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er. A good example is my obese aunty who loves to eat chicken and chips at a food...
^^
Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... tends to promote a vegetarian lifestyle and snacking on fruits and nuts. When pe...
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Line 6, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , living
...d nuts and eat adequate vegetables. Thus,living a disease -free live. As a result, more...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 602, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fruits
...o individuals who ate more of vegetables,fruits and nuts who were less likely to have ...
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Line 6, column 632, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vegetables,fruits and nuts who were less likely to have any heart disorders. ...
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Line 8, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der to deter people from buying them and promote healthy nutrition and lifestyle....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91294387702 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7463449465 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288779079646 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110884670384 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760219456039 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201340991445 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603457564768 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.