You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
One miracle of Science is to make travel possible in the areas where it seemed impossible in the past.
There are myriad of advantages. Firstly, by travelling to these areas, the humankind is exploring various opportunities for themselves. For instance, according to the research, it has been observed that Antarctica is the hub of many natural resources which includes various types of minerals which may become beneficial for the mankind in the near future. Secondly, some people believe that the South Pole is not visited by many people, so it could also be beneficial for a country from tourism point of view. For example, many tourist companies are interested in opening accommodation facilities in the area so that they could earn from it. There are many fun activities which can be done in the Southern region which includes hiking, swimming and ice-skating etc.
However, contrary to the above points, some people maintains that there are some cons to explore South Pole. They argue that human is responsible for the exploitation of the mother earth. They believe that the first disadvantage of going to the South Pole is that people start hunting the helpless animals. For example, Few times back, the killing of a polar bear grabbed the headlines. A hunter had murdered the creature for his entertainment purpose only which ultimately results in the extinction of the polar bear. In addition to this, few people states that our world is facing an issue of global warming. They believe that if human starts visiting these unexplored areas then its ice will start melting with more speed due to their experimentation which could be devastating for the world.
In conclusion, I would say that it is a blessing in disguise that human is not able to explore the area fully due to its environment limitations because if they are able to enter into the area freely than they will pollute it also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e area freely than they will pollute it also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.965625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68173618844 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6899302465 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112579023193 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388138635245 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235377490601 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060722662498 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286372237685 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.