College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
There might be plethora of students enrolled in the field of study where job's are available in abundance. Out of those students only few have passion towards the field of study while the rest are the ones who are seeking for a high income and valuable job which is the need of the time. The prompt of the essay is that students should choose to accept the field of study according to availability of the job. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the author's assertion as field of study keeps on vacillating according to the need of the time.
Firstly, the students who pursue their studies needs to have a keen interest and passion towards their field as those are the subjects which are going to be their quotidian job for the next three decades. For instance, an employee is often indolent towards his job not because he is lethargic but due to lack of interest. No individual is lazy when it comes to a predilection for performing a job. The above example illustrates that having an enthusiasm and eager to learn attitude is must as that is the only key to survive in this highly competitive world.
Secondly, a decade ago computer industry was a boom and trending which produced a myriad jobs but in this ever changing world the automobile industry was supplanted by the artificial intelligence and a exponential shift of this market has led to unemployment in the field of computer industry. Hence, in order to sustain in this current volatile industry one has choose their study according to their interest.
Further, even if we assume that job shifting is not dynamic one has to still pursue his or her interest as happiness lies above. Happiness plays a crucial role in determining the efficacy of his or her work. Success in only achieved by industrious people as interest and having an inexorable attitude is a key component here.
Obviously, some might argue that in this increased globalized market with skyrocketing jobs one should choose practical path. However, it isn't that precisely why we should follow our interest? if we do so we are capable of competing at the highest level. One who ignore their inner voices do so at their own peril.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...y opinion, I strongly disagree with the authors assertion as field of study keeps on va...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nted by the artificial intelligence and a exponential shift of this market has le...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
... this current volatile industry one has choose their study according to their interest...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ould choose practical path. However, it isnt that precisely why we should follow our...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...sely why we should follow our interest? if we do so we are capable of competing at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76127320955 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64635091658 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4438194025 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327811586892 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110159141442 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122576898196 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169547327195 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134706967723 0.0667264976115 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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