In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without
employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should
be done about it?
Although a huge number of students graduates with flying colors, they were not be admitted to any places of work. As a result, causes should be investigated, and steps should be taken to solve the problem.
There is no denying that several employees pursue an inaccurate job, which is firmly opposite their major at universities. However, the lack of experience makes their curriculum vitae less potential, and therefore they cannot gain a competitive edge compared to other candidates. For example, if an economic student strives towards the position of a marketing team, the recruiter will be wary of his or her talent, causing an unfortunate elimination.
In order to alleviate the issue, effective measures should be implemented. It seems a fair suggestion that the national and local authorities should take into account organizing career orientation events, and increase the provision of vocational courses for school leavers before sitting an exam to enroll in a university. Consequently, young people can verify their instinct and capacity, putting more value on contemplating which major to pursue.
In general, assisting figures to have an appropriate job must be the government’s top priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in general, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40434782609 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98100159517 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682608695652 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7225820334 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15215123749 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574653928063 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467895063647 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850155308704 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019048238229 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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