Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, climate change is intimidating all around the world. Some people argue that we must be willing to tolerate rather than try to resolve it. In my opinion, I disagree completely with this issue, because I believe that we will tackle this problem to reduce the Earth’s climate.
On the one hand, there are many solutions that government and individuals could take to inhibit global warming. Firstly, the government could give regulation to limit cacbondioxit emission which causes climate change. For example, they can impose ‘green taxes’ to transfer fields and increase environmental taxes when companies pass through a level of waste quality. As individuals, Family should use clean energy to limit contribution to climate. For instance, when you go to the market instead of consuming plastic bags, we could use paper bags to fall the number of waste. Every civil should encourage each other to remove by sharing cars, public transports to make a cutback amount of emissions from cars, and decrease traffic jams during rush hours.
On the other hand, we also should agree to take the truth that climate is altering completely. many damages do not cause by humans such as volcano, earthquake, tsunami, ... In 2018 mega-fire, happens in Australian due to the increase in temperature, burned the large size of the forest and rare animals had tended to be deleted. also the activity of the volcano, experts can forecast but can not prevent it as their power is too biggest. The environmental population from fires with a significant degree of heat would destruct the Ozon floor, houses, facilities even though a thousand people would lose the home, missed jobs so they have to immigrate to new areas, near areas to make a living. it leads to the repetition of polluted urban. Otherwise, melt ice, an increase in the level of the sea are effect importantly on fisherman's areas. Finally, the break thought of epidemic diseases can not predict, everyone has to live together and spend a great deal of time to create medicines, vaccine.
In conclusion, I am looking forward to that everyone will deal with the contribution of climate. governments and residents will have a positive activity to adapt to the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07084468665 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7189655766 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637602179837 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4890277457 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9473684211 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153593865592 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375201547581 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405827199398 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827514470264 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538509373512 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.