Do you agree or disagree that life today is much easier than it was when your grandparents were children
It is critically important to us human beings to enjoy life and live as comfortably as we can. Personally, I am of the opinion that life is easier today than it was several years ago when our grandparents were children. I believe this because of several reasons. Some of which I will try to explore in the below essay.
To begin with, people used to work for a very long time before than compared to today. They used to work for six days in a week with longer hours and got a relatively less pay check. In contrast, today's generation mostly get by with a five-day workweek, reduced hours and a heft salary in their bank accounts. My grandfather's story is a compelling illustration for this. He used to work arduously in a bank from Monday to Saturday, roughly 50 hours per week and received just enough to run the house. Whereas, I work for only 35 to 40 hours per week and still can enjoy a lavish lifestyle.
Secondly, the rapid rise in science and technology had led to an advent of newer tools which have made our life more easy and comfortable. The need to reduce human effort and increase human comfort were the main reasons behind this technology boom. Foe instance, the early household kitchen only used to have a simple stove for all cooking purposes. In contrast, our kitchens are filled with all kind of modern appliances like refrigerators, toasters, blenders and microwave ovens. These appliances have definitely enhanced our way of living by reducing the amount of effort it takes to gay grinding something by hand.
Finally, the internet has shaped up pretty well and we can use it whenever we want for our needs and purposes. The internet is a place for all kinds of information from various areas of life. It provides a very efficient and simple way of gathering information that was not available previously. Like for example, several decades ago, in order to study, you had to visit a library and refer uncountable books to learn about a particular topic. Today, this is possible only with a single click on our smartphones. My own personal experience is very suitable for this. When I moved out of my parent's house to study engineering four years ago, I had not the slightest idea of how to cook. But, I actually ended up the necessary cooking skills by looking at recipes online and trying to imitate them. I believe if I was living at the time my grandparents did, this would not have been possible.
So to conclude, I strongly agree that life has now definitely become simple and easier to live that at time of our grandparents. I feel this way because of reduced work to get more income, useful technological inventions and the ease of internet use to cater to any of our needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 247, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...cal inventions and the ease of internet use to cater to any of our needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, i feel, in contrast, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63278008299 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65034246476 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547717842324 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5921237322 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8846153846 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142621669344 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391075827817 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803859528298 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933028121626 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838537055418 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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