You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say
What position you are applying to
And where it was advertised. In your letter
Include some information about your skills, education and experience.
Explain why you are interested in this job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in a position that is available at your company: “Coating Shop Manager” which was advertised in a Tehran News on Monday 15th of September.
I am a Material Engineer and in my recent position, I am working as a coating expert. I got my M.Sc. degree from Science and Technology University of Iran with GPA of 17. I have been working in the field of high temperature coatings for almost 8 years and I have done a great deal of research on different methods and a wide range of coatings which are applying on hot components in modern gas turbines. I have been engaged in many R & D projects both as a leader and as a team member.
The reason that I am interested in this position is that, recently, I want to excel in my career and unfortunately, in my present workplace, there is not enough room for promotion. I am looking for more challenges and responsibilities to apply all my capabilities.
I appreciate it if you consider my attached CV. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need more information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in a...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sc
...working as a coating expert. I got my M.Sc. degree from Science and Technology Uni...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Yalda Asgari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63902439024 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03177395484 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6913843306 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125828813377 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505628011418 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330609908042 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722277429443 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326254754577 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.