Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society but nobody has agreed on what an ideal society would look like. What do you think is the most important element needed to make a society perfect? How can the ideal society be achieved?
What a perfect society is and how to reach it are debatable questions among people. This essay will answer both questions.
I believe that an ideal society only becomes the truth when poverty is eliminated and education is rolled out to all people without any racism between them. Without being poor, people will have enough money to afford their basic needs and even think about sharing their abundance to others. Thanks for that, people are no longer to be hateful or skeptical to their fellows; they start to treat others with love, kindness, and empathy. In that perfect world, education is not a privilege for only the wealthy, but is given to any citizens with the same quality of teachers and textbooks. This new education allows students to be treated equally, no matter what their races and their ages are.
Both the government and its citizens must put a significant deal of effort to make the dreaming society in reality. In terms of the government, they should spend more budget on education, healthcare system, and food supplies to improve people’s lives. If people are full, cultured and healthy, they are less likely to commit crimes or behave badly. At individual levels, people need to study and work harder to contribute to the development of the nation. Smart and knowledgeable individuals will produce more properties and inventions for the wealth of the society.
In conclusion, an ideal society is only achieved when people are not poor anymore and are fully educated. To do so, the government should invest more money in some key fields to make people’s lives better. Individuals also need to study hard to obtain more knowledge so that they are potential enough to develop the country.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-09 | Hanachan123456789 | 78 | view |
- In countries where there is high unemployment most pupils should be offered only primary education There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people Discuss the advantages and disadvantages 84
- The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing What are the reasons What are the impacts 78
- Some people believe that young people know about international pop and movie stars but know very less about famous people from the history in their own country Why is this How can more interest be created in young people to gain more knowledge about their 67
- For school children their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... perfect society is and how to reach it are debatable questions among people. This ...
^^^
Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otential enough to develop the country.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51936701691 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7041615256 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262016535863 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804153407446 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798294691789 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159349635352 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354346235824 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.