A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
"All the students of the country should acquire the same education till they enter their college.", I disagree with this statement as it is based on an assumption that all the students are the same and have the same caliber. It is just like testing a tortoise and a cheetah in a race, even after knowing that both of them have different characteristics.
To understand the flaw in the above recommendation let's look at an example, in India, on average fourteen lakh engineers graduate every year and these individuals are forced to study History, Geography, and other irrelevant subjects and which they are never going to use in their future. These individuals could have utilized this time to gain higher knowledge in their own respective fields.
Moreover, the education system that teaches everyone the same things is going to test everyone is going to be tested in the same manner too, which is going to create a lot of pressure on the individual students. In a survey, it was shown that the education system in India (which is based upon the above recommendation) has resulted in pressurizing the individuals which has led to a higher suicide rate among students.
Some people would say that everyone should gain common knowledge till they enter the colleges as students should have the basic knowledge of every discipline but I would love to ask them how does a humanity graduate going to use organic chemistry or how is reading about the emancipation proclamation going to help an engineer.
In a nutshell, I would like to say that we need to understand the different people have different interest and getting a basic knowledge about a field can be achieved by studing all the subjects on a lower level and till the time they reach the college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8903654485 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80307333457 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501661129568 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2085064291 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.0 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 23.4991977007 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15219349135 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617699880993 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758004174063 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846398898273 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613628311865 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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