Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Masses do agree that people need to be physically stable while coming to sport however few ponder the individual need to be mentally stable. Before entering into sports mentally prepairedness and physically resilient both are necessary. This essay pertain both views but as i believe that people need to be mentally prepaired before pitching into sport.
In this era, people are more focused about the sport activities for being fit and active. But as per my view, masses who are not mentally prepared for such activities can not take advantage of these activities. Once people are mentionally prepare than he can easily be fit and active and healthy. people which are physically resilient but are not mentally prepare for sports then there might be lack of consistency and because of lack of consistency people might have lost their interest from it. Being regular is the key in the sport activities to get fit and healthy.
However, in contrast, individual who are mentally stable but are not physically capable then can not be the part of sports activities. In every sector of international and national sports people physical standards are kept on priority if the candidate not fulfill the requirements then he can not be the memeber of the team because of dearth of standards. For example for a racer his legs need to be fit to win the race if he has any injury in his leg then he can not win the race even he is mentally fit.
To sum up, it is clear with the discussion that both things are necessary to take part in sports activities but the people with mentally fit has more weightage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'pertains'.
Suggestion: pertains
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, while, for example, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77338129496 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59334556698 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474820143885 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.587953866 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223413157834 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103521944307 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457041938816 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155788062756 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373363716153 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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