Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
In this era of technology peoples Was not maintain relationship with family and surroundings.Familu plays a key role in Our Development phase.
To begin with following the robotic lifestyle people Also lose their feelings towards their Family and Loving once; In Addition, They make new Friends on online websites and make their communication easy through the internet but bond between parent and child are very strong but because of the shaw off feelings among youngsters take to them on bottom. Further more some of them Feel Ashamed to introduced their Mother and father to their Friends because of old age and poor clothes.
Secondly This incidence Occurs as a result of lake of awareness among Growing Childrens. Sometimes child want to complete there study so for that purpose they go far away for complete their Desire goal, so that time because of distance between parents and child make their Bond very weak. In further some of people like to live with their wife and children but they don't want to live with their parents. According to me I think person should have spent more time with family and they have to support their family as well as they have to attain in events and functions with family it can increase bond between family and person.
To conclude that weak relationship between family and a person is very problematic now a days, hence parents should understand and motivate there child for doing such activities and always support them to build their future and if parents is working they have to take off in weekends and spent so many time with the children it can improve relationship between family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91366906475 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50132204576 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.388887947 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.75 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149638423623 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690824035783 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593824088205 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977962755937 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334814578132 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.