In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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...ocate taking a gap year in order to work or travel before beginning one’s tertiar...
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...ginning one’s tertiary education. While this offers a few advantages, there are al...
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...hile this offers a few advantages, there are also some disadvantages which are wo...
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...lling or working before their university education. Firstly, through travelling, ...
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...l be able to expand their horizons. When students go overseas, they will be expos...
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... cultures and customs. As a result, they will gain a deeper understanding of the ...
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...ddition, students who work will learn to appreciate the value of money. This is b...
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...y will realize the hard work involved in earning money. Consequently, they would ...
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...e before purchasing anything they desire and may become less impulsive in their s...
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... the first place, travelling could cause people to feel homesick. Many students h...
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...been apart from their family and friends before so when they travel, they may mis...
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...ople. In extreme circumstances, students may even become depressed. Additionally,...
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...who work may not want to return to their studies. The reason for this is that the...
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...y earning money and becoming financially independent. Therefore, their whole futu...
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... negatively affected as these days it is very important for everyone to graduate ...
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...ee in order to be competitive in the job market. In conclusion, if students take...
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... gain invaluable experience and learn to become more independent in relation to m...
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.... However, they may also become homesick and end up not continuing their studies....
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...e, it is necessary to weigh the benefits against the drawbacks carefully before c...
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...s carefully before coming to a decision as to whether students should go on such an adventu...
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...ecision as to whether students should go on such an adventure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32673267327 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79262140808 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7270383541 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9473684211 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111023402277 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402875063858 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418090052731 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0360456163931 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036582456741 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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