it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Friendship is an important factor in socializing life. Most people like to go out and spend their free time with their friends. Therefore, choosing your friend is an important which can reflect things on you. Some people prefer to make new friends and other stick with an old friend. In my opinion, I prefer to keep my old friends. However, it is also important to make new friends sometimes.
First of all, some people prefer to stick with an old friend. This could benefit the friendship as it makes it stronger and healthy. Also, keeping an old friend make him like your brother. For example, I have a friend since I was 10 years old. He always helps me when I need one because our friendship became stronger and stronger while the time passes. Moreover, a strong friendship will make you find common things between you and your friend. Thus, spending time with your old friends would be more enjoyable.
Nevertheless, making new friends is just important as keeping an old one for the following reasons. First, sometimes you have to go to new town or country and your old friend is not there. Thus, you have to make a new one, or it will be affected you badly on your health and social skills. Second, imagine you just have hired in new company and your old friend is not at the same company as yours. This will lead to affect your health and performance in bad way, because you are going to be lonely and this may will affect your career. Finally, making new friends in widely range of knowledge and skills will expand your understanding and networking.
In conclusion, most people prefer to stick with an old friend seeking for common things and enjoyable time. However, making a new friend is sometimes is just important as keeping and old ones. Also, sometimes you have to make new friends. In my opinion, I enjoy spending time with my old friends, but I have to make new ones to keep socialized and communicated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63556851312 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43915494252 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440233236152 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3168204731 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1304347826 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9130434783 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95652173913 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.534081816077 0.236089414692 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202204242488 0.076458572812 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133708182595 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387224713846 0.150856017488 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171766650401 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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