Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In today’s world, advertisement has become a significant tool for marketing a product. Some people argue that advertisement induces us to buy products that we do not need while others opine that it creates awareness about new products that will improve our lives. I strongly believe that the latter is more correct as will be explained below:
To promote a product, companies propagate only the positive sides of the product to make it attractive, thus, consumers are inclined to purchase the products even when they are not required. Worse still, they buy the products, ignorant of the full picture. One such example is herbal products and weight loss supplements. In data published by the daily New York Times, the use of these products to lose weight has seen a significant increase in recent times, whereas, health experts believe that a safer way to lose weight would be through dieting and exercises. My friends who used these products have now repented of their choices.
Moreover, teenagers are often attracted to advertisements since most of them own mobile phones. These advertisements distract them from their studies by creating a desire in their minds for products they do not need. Frequently cited examples are the software games that are constantly advertised through social media. These games could alter their performances in their studies if not controlled. Additionally, it could distort their saving habits as expenses on these unnecessary games are sometimes considered a waste of money.
Generally speaking, it can be seen that despite the benefits of advertisements such as product awareness and promotion, it creates an impression in the consumers’ minds and they end up buying products they do not require. Therefore, it is highly recommended that a thorough research is done before buying products to avoid, being manipulated by advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to while'?
Suggestion: to while
... us to buy products that we do not need while others opine that it creates awareness ...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'thorough research'.
Suggestion: thorough research
...herefore, it is highly recommended that a thorough research is done before buying products to avoid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3110367893 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93413031465 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4325651641 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207666768856 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745017132533 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087721640603 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138436284152 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091964604249 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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