Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Nowadays, advertising has become a familiar part of our life. It appears everywhere we go, from buildings on streets to diversity of websites on the internet. This raises a concern that people may have become addicted to shopping under the effect of the commercial ads. I think this worry is reasonable although I am more on the positive side of the ads.
On the one hand, it is true that sell advertising is one of the main culprits for the overshopping of people. When we are looking for the social media such as Youtube channel or Facebook, we actually mean to keep track of the breaking news or find entertaining contents to relax ourselves after a long working day; any commercial ads are never in our intentions. Product brands soon know this and, thus, they coordinate with the media companies to let commercial ads pop up on the screen whenever the audiences are watching media contents. At the beginning, the viewers may not pay attention to these ads, but in the future, the constantly repetition of advertising will create more demands for people, urging them to buy products that they do not necessarily need. As a consequence, the audiences have become addicted to shopping.
Although the drawbacks of advertising for the overconsumption of people are undeniable, I am still convinced that advertisement plays an important role in telling us the information of numerous products when we need to go shopping. There is a fact that many useful products are hardly recognized by the customers because the features of these products are so unique that the customers cannot think about. Therefore, in this case, the advertising is needed for brands to introduce and promote the products to the potential customers. In addition, customers are often redundant to buy a products, especially expensive items, if they have little information of that product. However, by watching the commercials, the customers have a chance to get to know different aspects of the item before considering to buy it. For these reasons, the role of the product commercials is more crucial than ever to customers.
In conclusion, the negative effect of ads is clear since it encourages people to buy much more than their needs. However, looking at the bright side, I believe that we still need advertising because it proves useful when we need more information to consider before buying any products.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...n, customers are often redundant to buy a products, especially expensive items, if they ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 791, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering buying'.
Suggestion: considering buying
...ow different aspects of the item before considering to buy it. For these reasons, the role of the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00753768844 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89466537778 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9679221027 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.235294118 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224231152468 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659421235674 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549169764786 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130395850433 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344737576922 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...n, customers are often redundant to buy a products, especially expensive items, if they ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 791, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering buying'.
Suggestion: considering buying
...ow different aspects of the item before considering to buy it. For these reasons, the role of the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00753768844 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89466537778 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9679221027 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.235294118 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224231152468 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659421235674 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549169764786 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130395850433 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344737576922 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.