Some people belive that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world''s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, people can travel easily one destination to other by airways in short time of period. Certain human think that air travel should confine owing to it has causes pollution and use the world fuel resources. However, to a large extent, I disagree with the topic as according to my perception, airways assists more in several ways. The essay will project some thought with appropriate examples to define my view.
To commence with, humans can not travel fastly from one places to other. If people restricted air travel therfore they can not be reached anywhere and they may spend to give more money in other travle. Additionally, mankind can not be travelled safe and comfortable by other transport. As an epitome, in the year of 2010, the research was done by the government. How many people are travelled by airways? They collected information about 1 million travelled in 12 months.
Apart from that, a plethora of countries may be down their economy owing to if air travel may be close by the government so that they can not earn money. Because most of the countries are earned money by air travel. For instant, the government was researched in 2016 how much money cam from airways? They were earned around 10 million rupees by airway.
On the other hand, it may possible to use less air travel so that many countries may save their fuel and most important things such as global warming and pollution. People may not be facing problem from air pollution.
To conclude, however, air travel is essential part of our life, people use to go everywhere. It is jot possible to close travel by other transport, whenever people want to go long destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, apart from, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83916083916 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56969933791 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4705047969 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8888888889 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249845342193 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832542833777 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684798780508 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142531668026 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042923033472 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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