Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A number of experts claim that extinct of vital flora and fauna is the major substantial problem of our time, however, there are numerous others emerging environmental issues. I believe that other real problem like deforestation, air pollution, and global warming is crucial. This essay will examine the views in both topics.
To begin with, the disappearance of various flora and fauna can affect the ecological system. There are many plants and animals which help to balance our environment by absorbing poisonous gas from the air. Whereas, nowadays vanish of such creatures are seeing in public health and people are suffering from various dangerous diseases such as cancer, asthma because of more poison in the air. Similarly, extinct of a number of predatory animals helps to increase the number of herbivores. For example, if the animals like the lion, the tiger in the hit list disappear, consequently the number of deer, pig are in increasing trend which will be difficult to control and also can destroy the farmer's crops as well.
On the other hand, besides the loss of flora and fauna there are various environmental issues like global warming, air pollution, and deforestation, which are hampering the environment badly. Due to the overpopulation large area of forest had change into concrete and numerous number of the vehicle are creating more air pollution. As a result, people are suffering from drought, famine, risky sickness, and lower life expectancy. Besides, global warming is also emerging issues from which the whole world is suffering. For instance, the recent survey had revealed that within 20 years universe will suffer from extreme heat if the environmental pollution remains at the same level as of now.
In conclusion, extinction of wildlife is one of the major problems to balance the ecology, hence deforestation, global warming and air pollution are biggest and need to look for an effective solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21405750799 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78134788345 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1949555072 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9285714286 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147865155974 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508199137613 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440043201754 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956152968518 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635155662082 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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