Some people feel that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offence should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although it is believed by the masses that there should be fixed punishments according to the kind of offence for the convicts, the other section of society blames the pressing situations that forces the criminal to do that crime. Personally, I opine that the underlying conditions are the root cause of any illegal activity. This essay will examine both the arguments along with my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, there are umpteen reasons for opting for a definite kind of penalization to the offenders. Primarily, it is undeniable that adopting this kind of methodology saves precious time and it is also cost-effective to a great extent. To explicate, if a person has done a severe crime such as murder or attempt to killing, certainly considering all the facts that person also has to be punished in the same way. To exemplify, according to an article published on ‘Crime and Justice’ in ‘The Washington post’ by the editor-in-chief Dr. Benjamin Bradlees in June 2019, USA explicitly revealed that many middle-east countries are ranking high in terms of announcing fixed punishments for some designated crimes and eventually utilising time and money more productively in other important aspects. Thus, not only the guilty will be punished in the same way, but also will be greatly benefitted to the court as well as the petitioner.
However, some individuals argue that while sentencing a criminal the causal circumstances also has to be considered from where the felony stems. To substantiate, a punishment for the violent killing planned by a serial killer should not be the same as a murder done for self-defence. For instance, during a robbery in a department if a person commits a crime or kills the criminal, then undoubtedly the whole situation should be considered by the judge before announcing the final verdict. Hence, an analytical approach should be adopted while persecuting the sufferer by the legal authorities. Finally, in my opinion, it is undeniable that a convicted person should be punished by analysing the root causes behind that and the severity of the crime. Although without a doubt any kind of wrongdoing is punishable, there should be a consideration towards the personal circumstances such as poverty and mental health also should be taken into account during the final decision.
In conclusion, although a fixed type of punishment has certain merits, the viewpoint of other group undertaking the situations cannot be overlooked. However, I opine, judgements should undoubtedly be given according to the variant circumstances of criminals and keeping in mind that the aim of punishment to prevent further crimes to happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2614379085 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09590119546 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522875816993 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 763.2 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6123721255 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.058823529 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2941176471 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385909229594 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119236567221 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686464373785 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223632563608 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475821970098 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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