Some people believe that problem of illegal drugs can be solved by legallising all drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?
In todays fast growing world, youngsters are more exposed to illegal things. Crime rates are increasing year on year and Illegal drug smuggling is one of the major concern in which we must look after. In this matter, some people suggests that Legallisation of drug can be a good option to solve this issue of Illegal smuggling. I personally Agree with this view of legalising drug and elobrating my views in ensuing paragraphs.
To Begin with, Reason behind drug smuggling is the demand of this type of drugs. yougsters are taking cocain and weed for the enjoyment but it becomes addiction then after. Increasing demand of smuggled drug cause high price and It is difficult for teenagers to buy over priced drugs and that inturn increase crime rates. However, Legallisation of drug alleviates this problem as price would be lesser compared to smuggled drugs so people can easily buy these drugs from chemist and it cause reduction in crime rate too.
On the other hand, Dangerous desease like cancer is the one of the consequences that a yougster could face if they consume these drugs in high proportions. Once this drug, easily available in market, people easily buy this drugs and could exposed to this type of desease in future. So that capping of drug is needed after legalisation of drug. for instance, A Medicine Codilex, contains alcohol and that we can not purchase without doctor's prescription. Same could be done with drugs but in other context.
In conclusion, Legallisation of drug could solve the problem of smuggling, however proper actions need to be taken to solve another arised problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89259259259 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53477595918 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 270.0 20.2975951904 1330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1321.0 106.682146367 1238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 270.0 20.7667163134 1300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 7.06120827912 1345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414043594879 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.414043594879 0.084324248473 491% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27352602935 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378604981593 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.6 13.0946893788 1043% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -194.11 50.2224549098 -387% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.4 11.3001002004 950% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.89 8.58950901804 243% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.0 10.1190380762 1087% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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