In past when university student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development ?
In today’s world, education plays a pivotal role in individuals life, people acquire education to brightup their future and improve their lifestyle. It is said that in past student pursue university degree in their own nation but nowadays students are more inclined towards foreign education system. In forecoming paragraphs both pros and cons of this development to be discussed on the basis of evidences and examples.
To begin with pros, Indeed scarcity of education in country promotes foreign studies amongst university students. Very first advantage of this development is, one can persue a degree in which they have core interest without any constraint of limited subject of studies in their own country. Secondly, it gives very good opportunity to explore different courses that are good exposure in near future. For instance, a student named krina selected biology field in high school but her core interest was in genetical science. USA is a country which has excellent genetics research education system so she did her university course in USA. Which in turn helped her to get quality education in her interested subject.
Nonetheless, there are few cons for this advancement. Firstly, it is not in a benefit of any country as students are going to study abroad and young talent is going to vanish from country. For any country, young generation is bread and butter for their development. If students want to study abroad then it impacts country a lot as they are not going to help country in any manner whether it is in research sector or in any ecocnomical way. Secondly, Taxes from Education sector is contributing most to any country’s economy. so if students are going to other nations then it could affect this sector the most. For example, India’s tax collection reduced from 29% to 16% over the last ten years because of student migration. This shows impact of foreign studies.
Although, there are vital disadvantages for country, it is always an individual choice from where they want to persue their degree course according to their personal needs and advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00583090379 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59661544134 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524781341108 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 343.0 20.2975951904 1690% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1717.0 106.682146367 1609% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 343.0 20.7667163134 1652% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363917816352 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.363917816352 0.084324248473 432% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203932813666 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230885869283 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 173.7 13.0946893788 1326% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -276.67 50.2224549098 -551% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 137.1 11.3001002004 1213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.26 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.56 8.58950901804 286% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 139.2 10.1190380762 1376% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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