An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
The research studied by the international development organisation about the solution to the deficiency of vitamin A faced by the people of Tarus is definitely the need of the hour. The new breed of millet engineered considering millet is already adopted by the parochial people is the best solution. However there are certain points which hasnt been clearly expressed in the message.
As ostensibly mentioned in the essay, with the deficiency, there is a huge demand of the new breed of millet, however there is no focus on how are the demands going to be met. If they could have commented on providence of surplus raw materials, would have given everyone a better ideo on the production. The fact that the millet might require a particular type of soil which hasnt been clearly mentioned as well. Also the plan on how is the yield rate of the millet hasnt been included as well.
If a little more specifics on the road map of how are the hude demands going to be met was presented, this would have solved all the doubts which have a high possibility to be raised. Otherwise, the new breed of millet is definitely the saviour for those facing the consequences of deficiency.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... parochial people is the best solution. However there are certain points which hasnt be...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... However there are certain points which hasnt been clearly expressed in the message. ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...require a particular type of soil which hasnt been clearly mentioned as well. Also th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...h hasnt been clearly mentioned as well. Also the plan on how is the yield rate of th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... on how is the yield rate of the millet hasnt been included as well. If a little m...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 11.1786427146 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 28.8173652695 14% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 2260.96107784 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73786407767 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71040766989 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 204.123752495 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 705.55239521 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1811795147 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262808140611 0.218282227539 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102738252408 0.0743258471296 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791352638256 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18078337618 0.128457276422 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542117107861 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 98.500998004 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... parochial people is the best solution. However there are certain points which hasnt be...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... However there are certain points which hasnt been clearly expressed in the message. ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...require a particular type of soil which hasnt been clearly mentioned as well. Also th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...h hasnt been clearly mentioned as well. Also the plan on how is the yield rate of th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... on how is the yield rate of the millet hasnt been included as well. If a little m...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 11.1786427146 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 28.8173652695 14% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 2260.96107784 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73786407767 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71040766989 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 204.123752495 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 705.55239521 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1811795147 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262808140611 0.218282227539 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102738252408 0.0743258471296 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791352638256 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18078337618 0.128457276422 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542117107861 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 98.500998004 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.