When designing a building the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree and disagree
Many people consider that the function of the building should be the primary factor in the design stage and the outward appearance is a relatively unimportant factor. In my opinion, I disagree that the purpose of the building is the only important factor in the design.
On the one hand, the purpose of the building is, of course, pretty important. Take a sample, in terms of commercial and business sectors, stores usually are designed with great glass- windows in shop facades to fit for products on display. Besides, in a modern city where the population destiny and price of land are both very high, ugly high-rise building was erected because it is the only solution to provide apartments for urban dwellers.
On the other hand, the intended use of buildings is not the only factor in design. Architecture designers also focus on building's aesthetic qualities. In fact, old houses and traditional architecture in Hanoi, Vietnam is not fit for business or commercial purpose, but they are well- preserved to protect our history and culture.
In conclusion, both designers need to consider both purpose and appearance perspectives in design.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78384152804 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7061478555 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274312910148 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132877254187 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105325313407 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169463044511 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960249705497 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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