Essay topics:
Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs.
Discuss both views and give your opinion? (KHANH_HOMEWORK_05-06)
in Asian there is a problem of gender racism by old people tehy believe that female are not to be in the military and fighting,… and also think that male are fitter in war than woman.And I will analyze each opinion then figure out there meaning.
to begin with, arcording to the siencetist and other imformation that the muscle streangt in man body are automatically higher than the percentage of muscle in woman,secondary is woman gallantry is always needed to protected by man.in additional ,it is thought that wan is to be in the bussinus or in the kitchen instead of playing with gun and as a war leader,futher more they think woaman can only cooking not fighting just by a few test they sum up anfd think woman is waker
howerver,I think woman and man need to be affair with each other.in the sience way to think of they have found out that woman brain is smarter than man in somehow and they could bring a higher profit in working on brain and the stratnergy to win .And they can also make everything easier than man .And to have to think again woman will be more effect to be a leader than man .another factor that is Hai bat trung in Vietnam they are two woman who stand up and fight against the enemy and got the victory by using elephant while there is no male feature win in that war.
In conclusion I think that female and male should be well fair to each other cause they all have a ability to lead everything and to success with it so to gender must be treated equally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, then, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35971223022 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36396353308 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 92.0 20.2975951904 453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 394.435743253 49.4020404114 798% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 404.0 106.682146367 379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 92.6666666667 20.7667163134 446% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753833344661 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669339887408 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170782990978 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585634287261 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203775042827 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.4 13.0946893788 347% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.98 50.2224549098 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.8 10.1190380762 383% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.