Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent days many technologies are being used to supervise people’s activities. Many individuals are unsuspecting that they are being monitored by using these technologies such as mobile phone tracking and security cameras. The impending essay will discuss why the benefits of this technology development do in fact override the drawbacks.
In todays’ world technology development helps societies in many ways. Firstly, one of the best technology developments is observing the publics’ doings by using surveillance cameras. These surveillance cameras are widely used in traffic monitoring systems. Police departments can identify the theft vehicles and smuggling easily by tracking the number plates of vehicles by using these surveillance security cameras. In addition, these observation cameras are being used in many apartments, hospitals, and colleges to watch any unusual events are happening. Secondly, cellphone tracking technology assists the police departments to save children and women from kidnappers and thieves. For example, the Kavalan app has been introduced by the Chennai police department to track the victims. The app is being installed and used by many female students and working women.
In many situations, citizens are unknowing that they are being watched by security cameras or by cellular phone tracing technology. To begin with, some fellows feel that monitoring persons without their knowledge are ethically wrong. These days many people have affected personally by the camera recordings. Furthermore, some folks use cellphone tracking technology to monitor others’ personal life. In a recent news article, a 26 years old boy recorded many girls’ personal activities without their awareness and threatened them.
To conclude, some persons are involving in criminal undertakings by using technology innovations. However, in most situations, technology helps society greatly like save girls’ life, reduce crime actions, and so on. Though the technology has several noticeable demerits, if they are handled well by the general public, definitely the merits outweigh.
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 61
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Now a days technologies is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing For example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many cases people being monitored are unaware that this is happening Do you think the advantages 86
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras In many cases the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening Do you think the advantages 67
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life Others think it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this surveillance' or 'these surveillances'?
Suggestion: this surveillance; these surveillances
... the number plates of vehicles by using these surveillance security cameras. In addition, CCTV cam...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing wrongly used by several persons. In conclusion, some people are involving i...
^^
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... persons. In conclusion, some people are involving in criminal activities by using technol...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'situations'' or 'situation's'?
Suggestion: situations'; situation's
...ological advancements. However, in most situations technology helps people greatly like sa...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00613496933 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09050259554 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.029500398 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409891091531 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139062383567 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795173966929 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280444498901 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824746450217 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.99 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.