At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?
There is no iota of doubt that, nowadays young personels are being significantly increased in several countries demographs than elder ones. This induction certainly aid long time service provider with noticeable number of professionals and lower health crisis although lack of skills in job sector and antisocial activities are the primary drawbacks. While there are both advantages and disadvantages in having tender person in rising levels, the positive aspects take precedence over the negative aspects.
There are multitudinous benefits of juvenile individuals and the most evident merit is in service sector. These people from very early age indulge themselves into profession which helps the country to find fresh, new talent for significant number than of aged people. Teaching new application is more easier to than anything else and thus help to increase the GDP for a developing nation like Bangladesh where people started to earn their livelihood at the age of 25 and last for 40 or more years. Moreover, young people are more healthier as these keep themselves fit by taking exercise regularly. As a result, authorities can save their annual budget from medical sector and spend those in other fields to make one skillfull.
The obvious demerits of having young adult, however is the lacking of experience. In many occupation, it needs skills and experiences which can be earned after certain period of service where older citizen already have those experiences. Furthermore, to provide job to fresher, government need to develop considerable number of sectors, which is time consuming, as a result unemployment can rise that leads the individual to commit crime. As an example, a recent survey published in the Daily Star newspaper stated that crime rate in Bangladesh increased 20% in recent years and most of the guilty are of 25-35 aged people. Despite this, the issues can be effectively addressed through proper management and pose only a minor threat to the advantages.
In conclusion, young people has noticeable impact in the growth of nation that cannot be achievable with older citizens, therefore, having significant number of fresh citizens eventually outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ged people. Teaching new application is more easier to than anything else and thus help to ...
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Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
... more years. Moreover, young people are more healthier as these keep themselves fit by taking ...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occupation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occupations'.
Suggestion: many occupations
...owever is the lacking of experience. In many occupation, it needs skills and experiences which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36887608069 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85403876878 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636887608069 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.425585568 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.071428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179576681493 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550849481449 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470023265559 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11676888325 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422499066324 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.