A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, there are some people who argue that a country with diverse personalities and cultural background will become more fascinating and make faster development. In my opinion, I totally agree with this Viewpoint and will prevent my reason in this essay.
To commence with, the combination of cultures in the same country really makes that country more interesting. It is because a citizen of multicultural country can enjoy a variety of traditions, cuisines, and costumes from different countries at the same time. For example, when people live in the USA which is a real hotpot of the world, they are able to try all kinds of food ranging from Western to Eastern dishes. Moreover, they can also enjoy people wearing clothes from various cultures when they are on the street, which really adds spice to life.
In addition, when a country accommodate people of various nationalities, it is more likely to experience faster of growth. People coming from different nations will have different logic and thought process. Therefore, when they are combined in a mutual working place, they are able to discuss and think up different unique ideas for a project or brilliant solutions to existing problems. This helps entrepreneurs develop quickly and thus, contributing to the economic growth of the whole country. For example, people from Asian countries often perform better at mathematics, while people from European ones are excellent at engineering skills. When collaborating with each other, they might create break ground ideas for the company and the country where they lived at the same time.
To conclude, I believe that, thanks to the diversity of cultures, a country's daily life becomes much more interesting and simultaneously, the harmony of people from different nationalities will help a country develop faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25255972696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81217071234 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8267975495 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18039141352 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731705536515 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599051287284 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130458411096 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488356086687 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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