A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?
Tourism has been playing an indispensable part in our society for many decades. However, this can take its toll on a nation’s well-being when traveling is not properly controlled. Personally, I believe that the benefits of tourism can totally overperform the drawbacks due to enormous advantages it brings to our world
On the one hand, tourism can be the main threat of environmental destruction and cultural loss. In detail, when a place of interest is overcrowded, the natural ambiance often becomes exploited. For instance, the influx of tourists flocking to one place can lead to a large amount of gas emitted by transportations with numerous plastic wastes being littered, together they become immensely deteriorated to the biodiversity. Moreover, many traditional jobs and skills like fishing or farming are really vulnerable and potentially extinct when local people are forced to work in the tourism industry for higher pay
On the other hand, travelers can not only bring economic but also cultural merits to a country. Tourism has become the backbone of many economies in the world since it brings more job opportunities to indigenous people. Specifically, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotels, amusements, transportation and food, thus, more demands are made in correspondence with the employment rate, greatly supporting the economy. Furthermore, via tourists, many countries can effectively promote their national identities or natural beauties that they are endowed with to a larger scale of people. Particularly, once travelers arrive back at their home, they usually express how they feel or what they saw in their previous trip, which can arouse the curiosity of their family and friends
To conclude, despite the fact that tourism can be the main cause of many issues associated with the environment and culture, it has an extremely positive influence on the economy and provides a country with more chances to promote uniqueness and images as well. Therefore, I suppose that the advantages of tourism can outweigh its downward side
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i suppose, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36778115502 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99756771101 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.69055324 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.545454545 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9090909091 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208917937089 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853659580073 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708333617913 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138828452536 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409339171518 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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