You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Vineeta Jain and I enrolled for a cookery course which was a short one.I am writing this letter in reply of your feedback on "Italian Cuisine" that I attended last month,in June.I must say that the course was worth to learn.
Though I used to practice by myself at home before joining this. Result was not as good as it is now after learning from your cookery school.Me and my husband are a big fan of italian food.Cooking is one of my favourite hobby and in this way,now I am fulfilling my cooking hobby and serving everyone delicious Italian items.
I must say that method of teaching,in particular by Nisha mam was excellent.She used to show every thing and every step in a detailed way.Also,it was more of a practical and entertaining approach which helped me a lot to do better.
I am recommending this course to all my friends who are beginners in cooking.However,for myself,I would love to learn baking through which I can learn some baking items.It will polish my skills and improve my baking.
Eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Vineeta Jain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Vineeta Jain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77604166667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92446409353 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.259662876 44.8134815571 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.0 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204019553357 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899914045256 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714820913857 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107872486139 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841182948919 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.