According to a number of researches the population of the gray masses Will be higher than youngsters in multifarious nations. IT is definitely a adverse phenomenon before sharing my personal perception I will describe both views in forthcoming paragraphs.
Advantageous side of growing the proportion of old ones is that, the advancement in medical sciences which increases the life span of old peeps which may rise the difference between in the amount of old and young generation. Firstly, people of the modern epoch having small families that is due to the social awareness of having tiny family will be happy family. Secondly, the hetric and stressful life deprived the masses for having children owing to these causes the ratio of young ones reduces.
However, The myriad of downsides is derived from the acceleration of old generation. First and foremost, the development of a region directly relay on the youngsters owing to the fact that they are totally familiar with the latest technology so declined rate of young People interrupt the progress of a national well as, it may also lead the economical crisis in a dwelling country therefore, old peeps are less productive. For instance, in the technosavy era the industrialization totally depends upon technology and the most of the gray masses are techno phobic whereas the high rate of old people than youngsters may disturb the development of industry.
In my opinion, the presence of old masses Will motivate the new generation with their wealth of experience and advice despite this their downsides are more significant due to the fact it may have more adverse impact than its possible ones.
In conclusion, although the inclined proportion gray peeps will decrease the employability, it will be detrimental for modern digital world.
- Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to country side To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to country side To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The pictures below show the changes of the park from 1980 to now 73
- It is better learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of the older people than young People in many countries in the future do you think it is positive or negative development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... multifarious nations. IT is definitely a adverse phenomenon before sharing my pe...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... national well as, it may also lead the economical crisis in a dwelling country therefore,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21305841924 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92443698716 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1160721046 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.7 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186187574441 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703986002396 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453189909503 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980452806623 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305883076531 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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