Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Enrolment Officer,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to you express my interest in the computer programing course offered during this summer. I always wanted to have formal education in this subject, but unfortunatley I never had time due to my busy schedule.
However, there is one issue with my eligibilty to enrol in this course that I have not completed the prerequiste course that was offered. I have working knowledge of computers, and in my free time, I have learned basic SQL language from a mobile applications. I have also utilized the self learned knowledge in my work by automating the excel sheets using SQL. I have also checked the course outline of the elementary course, it covers general computer skills and SQL language.
I do realize that I don't have a formal degree or course in the filed of computing, but I believe I will be able to keep up in this cource with steady pace, because of my background knowledge and expertise. Therefore, I will request you if can make an exception and kindly allow me to opt this course.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Regards
Ghufran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'application'?
Suggestion: application
...earned basic SQL language from a mobile applications. I have also utilized the self learned ...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rned knowledge in my work by automating the excel sheets using SQL. I have also checked t...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... automating the excel sheets using SQL. I have also checked the course outline of...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al computer skills and SQL language. I do realize that I dont have a formal de...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nd SQL language. I do realize that I dont have a formal degree or course in the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78974358974 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67306923691 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2248679302 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351250575633 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134077798691 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560010083955 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158644949423 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107646223348 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.