Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author concludes that, since there is a small posibility that a person might die as a result of the inoculations, they cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.Although, the cited evidences seem logical and probable however, the assumptions on which the conclusion relies does not lend credible support to the argument.Hence the argument seems logically unconvincing in several aspects.
Firstly, the author assumes that a person will die because he has been given the inoculations againts the cow flu.However this is not always the case.It may happen that the person has an allergic reaction to such vaccination and hence it led to his death.Or maybe the person was aldready affected by cow flu and was in a very serious condition and thus the vaccine could do little to improve his condition.Futher, the author provides the evidence of a small possiblity of the inoculations leading to death.But 'small possibility' is a very abstract term.For instance, if the popluation is small and if the possiblity of death is nearly as close to 0.001 percent then this won't be considered as significant a value.Thus not permitting inoculation against cow flue to be routinely adminstered would not be a prudent decision and the purpose of the argument would be undermined.
In addition to this, the author assumes that many lives would be saved if the inoculations against the cow flu would be routinely administered.But, the author should provide additional information of what kind of adminsitration were they adopting during this process and what impact did it have on the people. Also is there any kind of alternative drug available that could protect these people from the disease? If there is no other alternative method available then the government would have no other option but to save the people by allowing the inoculations to be adiministered.Thus,these major flaws should be atleast acknowledged and perhaps improved by stating the alternative methods that could be used to solve the problem.
To sum up, the argument consists of certain obvious fallacies and loopholes.To strenghthen the argument the author should have provided more information about the number of people that were given the vaccinations and what other factors could be attributed to death of the people.Also, the author should have been more specific while mentioning the small possibility of death among the people due to the inoculations.But in the absence of this data, the arguement relies on certain doubtful assumptions that render it unconvincing as it stands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...certain obvious fallacies and loopholes.To strenghthen the argument the author sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27912621359 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29836686982 2.78398813304 118% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492718446602 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 22.8473053892 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.310409766 57.8364921388 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 362.5 119.503703932 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.6666666667 23.324526521 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 5.70786347227 388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33044155813 0.218282227539 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152552441846 0.0743258471296 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838689263011 0.0701772020484 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1921151806 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777329078434 0.0628817314937 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.8 14.3799401198 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 48.3550499002 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.1628742515 254% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.197005988 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.32208582834 131% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 12.3882235529 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.1389221557 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.9071856287 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...st cow flu to be routinely administered.Although, the cited evidences seem logical and p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...t lend credible support to the argument.Hence the argument seems logically unconvinci...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t lend credible support to the argument.Hence the argument seems logically unconvinci...
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Suggestion: However
...en the inoculations againts the cow flu.However this is not always the case.It may happ...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...en the inoculations againts the cow flu.However this is not always the case.It may happ...
^^^^^^^
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Suggestion: It
...flu.However this is not always the case.It may happen that the person has an aller...
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Suggestion: Or
...ccination and hence it led to his death.Or maybe the person was aldready affected ...
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Suggestion: Futher
...ould do little to improve his condition.Futher, the author provides the evidence of a ...
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Suggestion: But
...ty of the inoculations leading to death.But small possibility is a very abstract te...
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Suggestion: For
...all possibility is a very abstract term.For instance, if the popluation is small an...
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Suggestion: Thus
...nt be considered as significant a value.Thus not permitting inoculation against cow ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...nt be considered as significant a value.Thus not permitting inoculation against cow ...
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Suggestion: But
...cow flu would be routinely administered.But, the author should provide additional i...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... what impact did it have on the people. Also is there any kind of alternative drug a...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ng the inoculations to be adiministered.Thus,these major flaws should be atleast ack...
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Suggestion: , these
...he inoculations to be adiministered.Thus,these major flaws should be atleast acknowled...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...certain obvious fallacies and loopholes.To strenghthen the argument the author sho...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...ld be attributed to death of the people.Also, the author should have been more speci...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...mong the people due to the inoculations.But in the absence of this data, the arguem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27912621359 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29836686982 2.78398813304 118% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492718446602 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 22.8473053892 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.310409766 57.8364921388 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 362.5 119.503703932 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.6666666667 23.324526521 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 5.70786347227 388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33044155813 0.218282227539 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152552441846 0.0743258471296 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838689263011 0.0701772020484 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1921151806 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777329078434 0.0628817314937 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.8 14.3799401198 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 48.3550499002 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.1628742515 254% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.197005988 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.32208582834 131% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 12.3882235529 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.1389221557 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.9071856287 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.