In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
A long time ago, the majority lived in small areas where people knew everyone around them. Currently, many people lived in huge cities and just only talking with few neighbours in their region. Therefore, the lifestyle of people has changed.
I think there are many advantages to living in a small community. Firstly, everyone lived near others so they could talk easily. Also, they could help their neighbour when getting some troubles. Secondly, the air in small villages was very clean and fresh so people could live here without worried about pollution. Moreover, you could be able to see the star in the night and it was very beautiful. Also, people could live peacefully without having to worry about the high crime rate like in the city. It was a peaceful life and gentle lifestyle that everyone wanted.
However, in addition to the benefits, I believe there would also be some disadvantages that it brought. Firstly, as we knew, because of the small areas, there weren’t have many shops or places of entertainment. As the result, people had fewer choices when shopping or recreation places. Besides, the lifestyle here wasn’t as busy as the city so if you liked busy life then small villages were not for you. However, the biggest problem that all families having children lived here had to face off with the quality of education here was worse than in the city. As the result, their children would not receive a decent education.
In my opinion, the advantages of living in a small community were better than the disadvantages. Lifestyle wasn’t busier than the city but the peace it brought was very wonderful. Also, if you were a tourist, I think small areas would very suit you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89310344828 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46589338823 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2584425424 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6842105263 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384288963311 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118924342333 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916165947989 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253567863089 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103526599228 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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