Many people/students toady are choosing to live and work in another countries after graduating from universities in their home country why is this ? Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages ?
In the present era, numerous pupils complete their study in home country but work in foreign nation after gradution. This is happening nowadays due to numerous reasons and there are some advantages and disadvantages of this trend, I will throw some light on it and reach to a conclusion.
To begin with, in the new millennium, after completing graduation majority of students move to develop nations for jobs. This is happening due to lack of job opportunities in home country. People are not getting job according to the field. So that is why unprecendened pupils like to move to another nations for work.
The most obvious benefit of this trend is earning sufficient salary. To clarify, in the develop countries, jobs are more in which government provide huge ammount of salaries and luxarious facilities to the workers by the help of which individual can live a luxary life. For example, in the present era, people of India, after getting graduation certificate, everyone is migrating to Canada to get better jobs and better living and working conditions. Therefore, to increase the standard of living, it is better to move to develop nations.
Apart from this, the pioneer demerit of this tendency is people face difficult in learning foreign languages. After shifting to another country, it is compulsory to learn their country languages to communicate with citizen of that nation. Which is extremely difficult for an individual to learn. Moreover, the another demerit is that it is difficult to adopt foreign lifestyle. The rule and regualtions are exteremely different from home country which is difficult for a person to adopt them quickly.
In conclusion, according to my prespective this trend has more disadvantages then advantages. So it is better to live in home country and it is the duty of the government to provide jobs to every individual which help to stop migration and which lead to stop brain drain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84266989314 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0584395622 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286901760486 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838965824762 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538512070499 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153481057415 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422555531034 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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