Some people think thai women should join the army, the navy, the air force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Irrefutably, the woman in the past had to live in four walls but nowadays some people agree that it should be mandatory for women to take part in particular type of jobs like the army, the navy, the air force. I totally agree with this statement due to women are equally capable and outperform in several sections.
To commence with, in this globalised era, women enters every field of work. They have equal opportunities to work in every sector in which they wish to work. To explicate it, women are equal to men nowadays. They are capable to do every work as the jobs like the army, the navy, the air force need officers who are physically fit and mentally strong. Today's women is perfect example of that criteria. To illustrate it, our constitution of India gives the right of equality to women. Nobody can stip her to work in these jobs by saying her weak. Hence, women should take participate in these jobs as women is equal to men.
Moreover, women should allowed to join the military services because today women empower every field of work. To elaborate it, in the past it is said that the women are weak gender and are not capable for any physical job. But now, she is physically fit and well managed in all sectors. To examplify it, the most known newspaper "The daily times of India" reports that more than 70%of women are working in IT department, space projects and much more educated than men. Therefore, women can get chance to do these jobs as they outperform in different sections.
To conclude it, i am in fully agreement that women should get allowed to join military services as she is capable of do everything and well managed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65423728814 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42301518474 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4098167821 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189144200484 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666429309578 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512877379025 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132333954588 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288169919462 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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