Life today is easier than it was when your grandparents were children
The prompt states that nowadays our lives easier than our grands had. I agree, this is a true as we have many things that help us to accomplish much stuff in a few minutes. there are many examples illustrate how our lives today are easier, I will discuss in the following essay.
First, cell phones, in the past those phones don't exist, thus, let's eliminate their roles and functions from our lives, what does the life could be? By phones and their access on internet, we can use many applications in which buy or even sell while we are at home. For example, when I wanted to sell a bicycle last week, I downloaded an application for selling the old items, then put my bicycle's picture with its price, after a few minutes it is sold. However, in the past, my grandma told me that one day she had to go a specific place for bicycle selling,and she had to postpone selling the bicycle many time because she had no enough time to go to the shop. Thus, it is obvious how the new technology that we have today makes our lives more flexible and easier.
Second, one of the most important thing that we have today our grandparents didn't have, is the easy access in educational websites and entertainer platforms. These online resources facilitate whatever you want to get it wherever you want. For example, previously, my grandma when she wanted to read book, she had to go to buy physical book, which was not easy to take it wherever she was. However, nowadays,the online books facilitate the reading any time any where, even in the transportations.
In conclusion, I have come up with the opinion that is our lives today are easier than our grandparent's lives. This is because technology and what offers for us eases many things, before they demand great effort to be done.
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| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
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- Important truths begin as outrageous or at least uncomfortable attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time 58
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 70
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 70
- Students are more influenced by their teacher than by their friends 60
- Many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks instead of starting a new business however one can buy a franchise A franchise is a license issued by a large usually well known company to a small business owner Under the license 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...accomplish much stuff in a few minutes. there are many examples illustrate how our li...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., cell phones, in the past those phones dont exist, thus, lets eliminate their roles...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... go a specific place for bicycle selling,and she had to postpone selling the bicycle...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...she had to postpone selling the bicycle many time because she had no enough time to go to...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ing that we have today our grandparents didnt have, is the easy access in educational...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...e books facilitate the reading any time any where, even in the transportations. In conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59119496855 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5057112091 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0523270226 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140693002872 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514813072746 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056805007076 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939403711706 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269885467813 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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