More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In recent times, urbanization has become a trend for both developed and developing countries all around the world. This tendency causes several problems that authorities have to deal with. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this phenomenon, and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
It is easy to see that the effects on large metropolises because of the great number of people who migrate to megacities are pretty serious. First of all, there is an increased crime rate in different kinds of areas. To be specific, we can all hear about crimes on daily news frequently and it results in people's negative behaviour which is insensitive and less open. Furthermore, in recent years poor air quality is caused by the significant rise in the amount of toxic emissions released from industrial sites and traffic. Serious air pollution puts inhabitants of cities at a higher risk of lung cancer and respiratory illnesses.
However, there are a variety of possible solutions available to address these issues. Firstly, the government should develop provincial towns and rural areas by moving industry and jobs to those regions and improving the education system there in order to reduce the proportion of the population who move to major cities, which helps to manage the community easily. The second solution would be to impose stricter regulations to limit hazardous gas emissions and encourage the use of more environmentally friendly energy sources and promote the use of public transport by making it more attractive and comfortable for people. The problem of both air pollution and traffic congestion would be effectively solved if more people decided to travel by bus or train instead of in their private vehicles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21352313167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78346874076 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672597864769 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8998239434 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128594365477 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355080026801 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342391373278 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708642456985 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287137912057 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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