Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. What extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a common belief that the male gender is stronger more competitive than female because of their nature. From my perspective, I think that both genders are competitive and, in this essay, I will support my opinion by relevant examples.
The physical and mental fitness of men is a very significant and confirmed basis for people, including me, to feel that men are stronger. That is to say, they are involved in many business and family obligations which drive them to meet their goals. The majority of the top management positions across the enterprise organizations are occupied by men, for instance, Mark Zuckerberg, Elon Musk, Jack Ma and so on. These positions require the individual to have good stamina, be able to work for long periods of time in stressful situations and have a great amount of energy, which is quite lacking in women.
On the other hand, it was true that in the past, females were less competitive as they just do their household chores and didn’t think about compete for high position in work like men. However, things have changed recently, because women now are more focused and energetic as compared to the past generations. For example, there are more females in the field of army and police officers, which has also proved that they are no less competitive.
In conclusion, although many people believe that men are naturally more competitive than women, it is not hard to see that women are just as capable competent as men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun business seems to be countable; consider using: 'many businesses'.
Suggestion: many businesses
...r. That is to say, they are involved in many business and family obligations which drive them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86454183267 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62608134552 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.0649247282 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.1 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226920084908 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857289755708 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900040513122 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15570521493 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106943132493 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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